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Task:
In your groups, you are going to write a reflective
essay about Florence Nightingale
Checklist
- You will have to plan before you write.
- Use Inspiration maps to map out your paragraphs.
- Each paragraph should have a topic sentence
- Each paragraph should have at least two supporting details.
- Each paragraph must have a transition.
- We have checked grammar, spelling and vocabulary.
- We have posted our paragraph on the blog
- We have emailed Ms. Nancy our plan.
Paragraph 1:
Background Information, who
was she, where was she born, what was her name? Personal life. Her family.
Where did she push the limits?
Paragraph 2:
What was the conventions/limits?
How did she push or break these conventions/limits? What was her point of view
about these limits?
Paragraph 3:
What were the short term and
immediate effects of her actions? What was the impact or the long term effects
of her actions? Give examples.
Paragraph 4:
Describe her personality
using adjectives. What learner profile traits does she have? How do you know?
Give examples. Is there a quote of hers that you like?
Paragraph 5:
How do you feel about what
she did? What do you think about it? Does anything surprise you? If you were to
meet her, what questions would you ask her?
4 comments:
Florence Nightingale had a feat by helping the hurt soldiers .
Florence was born 12 of May 1820 in Italy , her father was William
Nightingale , a rich banker .
First she was very religious and she thinks that God gave her the
possibility to help people who need to .
She didn't want to marry a young writer after 7 years of making her
mind she still said no (she had 22).
She loved having lessons from her father .She loves being a nurse and
that was her dream but when she asked her parents to be a nurse they
didn't accept because the hospitals were dirty and they didn't take
care of the nurses and there accomplishments .
She pushed the limits in Turkey 1954 and she saved many lives of
people who died in the war like :France , Bretain and Turkey fighting
Russia .
Finally Florence saved more lives than before and especially her
family that's why she became a nurse and they accepted her to be a
nurse and there was less people who were dead not like the others
before they gave her a medal and she have been called the Lady with
the lamp .
Florence Nightingale was a real hero .
We wrote 200 words
Thanks ,
Laila , Haidy and Lara
Question 3 Farida and Mariam
We think it was a good action from her. We think that she was
brave enough to do anything for her freedom. We are surprised by
her action that she was rich and she wanted to be a nurse like
poor people . If we met Florence nightingale we would like to ask
her why did she take this action .
Elissette and Nancy no. 4
Florence was motivated, and she was helpful because she made the
hospitals cleaner places. Florence was very religious that is why she was not
maried. She was open minded because she had alot of hopes and she is
caring because she cared about the sick and what to recover them. Althout
Florence wanted to help people to get better some doctors did not want her to help.
Florence Nightingale had a feat by helping the hurt soldiers .
Florence was born 12 of May 1820 in Italy , her father was William Nightingale , a rich banker . First she was very religious and she thinks that God gave her the possibility to help people who need to . She didn't want to marry a young writer after 7 years of making her mind she still said no (she was 22). She loved having lessons from her father .She loves being a nurse and that was her dream but when she asked her parents to be a nurse they didn't accept because the hospitals were dirty and they didn't take care of the nurses and there accomplishments . She pushed the limits in Turkey 1954 and she saved many lives of people who died in the war like :France , Bretain and Turkey fighting Russia . Finally Florence saved more lives than before and especially her family that's why she became a nurse and they accepted her to be a nurse and there was less people who were dead not like the others before they gave her a medal and she have been called the Lady with the lamp . Florence Nightingale was a real hero .
Layla, Lara and Haidy
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